He goes out on a late night drive in the wintry woods to relax and free his mind, but after he becomes stranded his mind is anything but free...
I hate giving poor reviews, because you already did more than I could have. If you wanted to keep it a short story, you still could have with a dozen or so more page. It reminded me of an "Urban Legend" that didn't have enough suspense. I needed to be scared and curious a little while longer. With a couple of more incidents before he met his demise you would have been on your way to something really good. Keep on writing, you have the potential for 5 stars.
Great book just left wanting more. You need to write a full book or a sequel to this book.
Very interesting straight to the point.
And there were no cars on the road
By Highboy Chest
Short, but interesting!
This story was really good. It was a very short quick read. It's great for just being in line waiting for something. It's great(: I wish it was longer!!
Loved it! I want more!
Woh, I liked this but I want more. Just as it got good, it ends!!
Good quick read
Liked how the author made you feel like you were getting to know the character and then …
Love this story!
If you like the style of writing where you are left to figure some stuff out like the monster then this is a very good read! Also, the writing is SO descriptive, like I could picture and imagine everything. Please have some more FREE books ;)
I think this story has potential. I just wish there'd been a bit more of a plot once he hit the woods. Decent short story. Look forward to hopefully reading a novel from this author some day.